Friday, May 12, 2017

"Freedom" Beyonce

[Verse 1: Beyoncé]
Tryna rain, tryna rain on the thunder
Tell the storm I'm new

I'ma walk, I'ma march on the regular
Painting white flags blue

Lord forgive me, I've been running
Running blind in truth

I'ma rain, I'ma rain on this bitter love
Tell the sweet I'm new


[Pre-Chorus: Beyoncé]
I'm telling these tears, "Go and fall away, fall away"
May the last one burn into flames


[Chorus: Beyoncé]
Freedom! Freedom! I can't move
Freedom, cut me loose!
Freedom! Freedom! Where are you?
Cause I need freedom too!
I break chains all by myself
Won't let my freedom rot in hell

Hey! I'ma keep running
Cause a winner don't quit on themselves


[Verse 2: Beyoncé]
I'ma wade, I'ma wave through the waters
Tell the tide, "Don't move"

I'ma riot, I'ma riot through your borders
Call me bulletproof

Lord forgive me, I've been runnin'
Runnin' blind in truth

I'ma wade, I'ma wave through your shallow love
Tell the deep I'm new


[Pre-Chorus: Beyoncé]
I'm telling these tears, "Go and fall away, fall away"
May the last one burn into flames


[Chorus: Beyoncé]
Freedom! Freedom! I can't move
Freedom, cut me loose!
Freedom! Freedom! Where are you?
Cause I need freedom too!
I break chains all by myself
Won't let my freedom rot in hell

Hey! I'ma keep running
Cause a winner don't quit on themselves


[Verse 3: Kendrick Lamar]
Ten Hail Marys, I meditate for practice
Channel 9 news tell me I'm movin' backwards
Eight blocks left, death is around the corner
Seven misleadin' statements 'bout my persona
Six headlights wavin' in my direction

Five-O askin' me what's in my possession
Yeah, I keep runnin', jump in the aqueducts
Fire hydrants and hazardous
Smoke alarms on the back of us

But mama, don't cry for me, ride for me
Try for me, live for me
Breathe for me, sing for me
Honestly guidin' me
I could be more than I gotta be

Stole from me, lied to me, nation hypocrisy
Code on me, drive on me
Wicked, my spirit inspired me
Like yeah, open correctional gates in higher desert
Yeah, open our mind as we cast away oppression
Yeah, open the streets and watch our beliefs

And when they carve my name inside the concrete
I pray it forever reads


[Chorus: Beyoncé]
Freedom! Freedom! I can't move
Freedom, cut me loose!
Freedom! Freedom! Where are you?
Cause I need freedom too!
I break chains all by myself
Won't let my freedom rot in hell

Hey! I'ma keep running
Cause a winner don't quit on themselves


[Outro: Kendrick Lamar]
What you want from me?
Is it truth you seek? Oh father can you hear me?
What you want from me?
Is it truth you seek? Oh father can you hear me?
Hear me out


[Spoken: Hattie White]
I had my ups and downs, but I always find the inner strength to pull myself up. I was served lemons, but I made lemonade

Changing the World One Word at a Times

A Variety of Spoken Work"

"Text Me" submitted by David O



"Times I've Been Mistaken for a Girl"  submitted by Autumn






"To the Boys that one Day May Date my Daughter" submitted by Max




"I am Not Black, You are not White"  submitted by Baptiste


"Love Letter" by Sarah Kaye submitted by Millie




"No More Heroes" submitted by Tsholo


"Smile" submitted by Zoya


WHAT KINDS OF STORIES MUST BE TOLD

THE STORY OF EMMETT TILL (you can find more information about Emmett Till at this link)




THE STORY OF EMMETT TILL IN A LONG AGO 
WRITTEN SONG AND
A NEW SPOKEN WORD POEM.

The Poetry of Protest Against Human Rights Violations






The Death of Emmett Till 




Was down in Mississippi not so long ago
When a young boy from Chicago town
Walked in a Southern door
This boy's fateful tragedy
You all should remember well
The color of his skin was black
And his name was Emmett Till
Some men, they dragged him to a barn
And there they beat him up
They said they had a reason
But disremember what
They tortured him and did some things
Too evil to repeat
There were screaming sounds inside the barn
There was laughing sounds out on the street
Then they rolled his body down a gulf
Amidst a blood red rain
And they threw him in the waters wide
To cease his screaming pain
The reason that they killed him there
And I'm a-sure, it ain't no lie
'Cause he was born in black-skin barn
He was born to die
And then to stop the United States
Of yelling for a trial
Two brothers, they confessed
That they had killed poor Emmett Till
But on the jury there were men
Who had helped the brothers commit this awful crime
And so this trial was a mockery
But nobody there seemed to mind
I saw the morning papers
But I could not bear
To see smiling brothers
Walkin' down the courthouse stairs
For the jury found them innocent
And the brothers, they went free
While Emmett's body floats the foam
Of a Jim Crow southern sea
If you can't speak out against this kind of thing
A crime that's so unjust
Your eyes are filled with dead men's clay
Your ears must be filled with dust
Your arms and legs
They must be in shackles and chains
And your mind, it must cease to flow
For you to let our human race
Fall down so God-awful low
This song is just a reminder
To remind your fellow man
That this kind of thing still lives today
In that ghost-robed Ku Klux Klan
But if all of us folks that thinks alike
If we gave all we could give
We could make this great land of ours
A greater place to live



Monday, May 8, 2017

FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE ASSESSMENT

FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE ASSESSMENT

BLOCKS F AND H - MAY 18
BLOCKS C AND D - MAY 19

FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE SUMMATIVE INCLUDES:


EXPLANATION OF THE POETIC/LITERARY DEVICES IN YOUR POETRY PACKET

YOUR ABILITY TO IDENTIFY POETIC/LITERARY DEVICES IN A POEM

YOUR ABILITY TO INCLUDE POETIC/LITERARY DEVICES IN A POEM

"THE MADIBA POEM"

I have to share this with you.  Thanks Alex for submitting a SA poet.

"The Madiba Poem"


Wednesday, May 3, 2017

HOMEWORK FOR FRIDAY/MONDAY


DUE ON FRIDAY MAY 5 FOR C AND D BLOCKS AND

MONDAY MAY 8 FOR F AND H BLOCK


  1. Go to You Tube, search, and listen to some spoken word poems.
  2. Find one that you like A LOT.
  3. Send me the link and a short explanation as to WHY THIS POEM IS EFFECTIVE.


I suggest going to BRAVE NEW VOICES or MIDDLE SCHOOL slam competitions.
The poem MUST BE school friendly.

THE F.L.I.R.T. MODEL - Use this to help you analyse poetry.

F.L.I.R.T(ing) with POETRY
F
Form/ Structure
Can you make any comments on the way the poem looks on the page? Does each stanza (paragraph) tell you something different?
L
Language
What examples of interesting “literary” or “figurative” language can you find? Metaphors, similes, alliteration, allusion, assonance, personification, onomatopoeia, etc.
I
Imagery
How does the poet paint images in the reader’s mind? Identify examples
R
Rhythm/Rhyme
Does the poem have a rhythm? Do any of the words rhyme? What literary devices does the poet use to create rhythm?
T
Theme
How would you describe the main ideas or message of the poem?
What is it trying to tell the reader?

Slam and Song - "War In Our City"

ANOTHER ISSUE ORIENTED SPOKEN WORD POEM.

WHAT ARE THESE KIDS SAYING?




Simile Poem "I'm Thinking About You"

LISTEN CAREFULLY, 
A SPEW OF WORDS COMES FROM THIS POET'S HEART. 
CAN YOU RELATE???


 

What makes this a good poem?

Monday, May 1, 2017

Sarah Kay - "Hands" - "I am Different" - Lilah - Tellilng Lies Poem




Part of Body POEM

Now, using Sarah's poem as inspiration, write a poem about a part of the body that we never really think about, but take for granted.  Hands - Feet - Eyes - Fingers - Head - Hair, etc, etc.












Telling Lies

Telling Lies Poetry

A different way of looking

One of the pleasures of writing poems is that you can tell lies without getting into trouble! It’s just using your imagination.

• Each member of your group will write three lies about the something other than the sea (the sky, the moon the stars, the sun, the clouds etc. can also work well)

• Be wild and imaginative with your lies avoiding the obvious or the dull (the moon is made of cheese).

A few examples of what they could write are:

The sea is made of blue ink and green paint

The sea hates it when it’s drawn as a wavy line.

The sea is cold because it hasn’t got a coat on

The sea going up and down is a sign it’s still breathing

The sea feeds on rubbish but even he can’t manage it all

If you smack the sea it will splash you back

The sea has a small cousin who is a pond

The sea will wave to you when you turn to leave


As you can see, what starts off as a lie becomes a mix of word play, sometimes truth, and off-the-wall creativity. It gives a chance to use imagination without forcing it and with a sense of fun.

Your group will perform/read the poem aloud - reading each member’s own line.